Staring back at herself, she looked blankly
Her eyes filled with unflowed tears
A meek smile smeared across her face
She looks at herself with shame and disgust
The complete opposite of what she looks like
Hidden beauty seen only through the mirror image
Indescribable beauty, the never ending smile on her face.
The gorgeous and astonishing face seenall hidden under her skin.
(19-11-06)
Her eyes filled with unflowed tears
A meek smile smeared across her face
She looks at herself with shame and disgust
The complete opposite of what she looks like
Hidden beauty seen only through the mirror image
Indescribable beauty, the never ending smile on her face.
The gorgeous and astonishing face seenall hidden under her skin.
(19-11-06)



Good one again but dark! I'd say try something like this.. you'd do a better job of it I'm sure!
Staring back at herself, she looked hard,
Her eyes filled with tears,
a frown across her face
She looks at herself with hurt and anger
Wondering about the girl who was younger
Happy, cheerful, witty and funny,
Indescribable beauty set in her eyes,
Smiling face and happy thoughts,
gorgeous face and astonishing grace,
The years gone and the bitterness long
How could this happen, so long yet so sudden,
Did she miss something?
Or did she miss it all?